EXCERPT: MISERY BAY
It is the third night of January, two hours past
midnight, and everyone is in bed except this man. He is young and
there’s no earthly reason for him to be here on this shoreline piled
with snow with a freezing wind coming in off of Lake Superior, the air
so cold here in this lonely place, cold enough to burn a man’s skin
until he becomes numb and can no longer feel anything at all.
But he is here in this abandoned dead end near the
water’s edge, twenty-six miles from his home near the college.
Twenty-six miles from his warm bed. He is outside his car, with the
driver’s side door still open and the only light the glow of the
dashboard. The headlights are off. The engine is still running.
He is facing the lake, the endless expanse of water. It
is not frozen because a small river feeds into the lake here and the
motion is enough to keep the ice from forming. A miracle in itself,
because otherwise this place feels like the coldest place in the whole
The rope is tight around his neck. He swings only
slightly in the wind from the lake. The snow will come soon and it will
cover the ground along with the car and the crown of his lifeless head.
He will hang here from the branch of this tree for
almost thirty-six hours, until his car runs out of gas and the battery
dies and his face turns blue from the cold. A man on a snowmobile will
finally see him through the trees. He’ll make a call on his cell phone
and an hour later two deputies will arrive on the scene and the young
man will be lowered to the ground.
On that night, I know nothing of this young man or this
young man’s death. Or what may have led him to tie that noose and to
slip it around his neck. I am not there to see it, God knows, and I
won’t even hear of it until three months later. I live on the shores of
the same lake but it would take me five hours to find this place they
call MiseryBay. Five hours of driving down empty roads with a good map
to find a part of the lake I’d never even heard of.
That’s how big this lake is.
“It’s not the biggest lake in the world. You
guys do know that, right?”
The man was wearing a pink snowmobile suit. He didn’t
sound like he was from downstate Michigan. Probably Chicago, or one of
the rich suburbs just outside of Chicago. The snowmobile suit probably
set him back at least five hundred dollars, one of those space-age
polymer waterproof-but-breathable suits you find in a catalog, and I’m
sure the color was listed as “coral” or “shrimp” or “sea foam” or some
such thing. But to me it was as pink as a girl’s nursery.
“I mean, I don’t want to be a jerk about it and all,
but that’s all I hear up here. How goddamned big Lake Superior is and
how it’s the biggest, deepest lake in the world. You guys know it’s not,
right? That’s all I’m saying.”
Jackie stopped wiping the glass he was holding. Jackie
Connery, the owner of the place, looking and sounding for all time like
he just stepped red-faced off a fishing boat from the Outer Hebrides,
even if he’d been living here in the Upper Peninsula for over forty
years now. Jackie Connery, the man who still drove across the bridge
once a week to buy me the real thing. Molson Canadian, brewed in Canada.
Not the crap they bottle here in the States and criminally try to pass
off as the same thing.
Jackie Connery, the man who wasn’t born here, who
didn’t grow up here. The man who still couldn’t cope with the long
winters, even after forty years. The one man you did not want to poke
with a sharp stick in January or February or March. Or any kind of
stick, sharp or dull. Not until the sun came out and he could at least
imitate a normal human being again.
“What’s that you’re saying now?” He was looking at the
man in the pink snowmobile suit with a Popeye squint in his right eye.
The poor man had no idea what that look meant.
“I’m just saying, you know, to set the record straight.
Lake Superior is not the biggest lake in the world. Or the deepest.”
Jackie put the glass down and stepped forward. “So
which particular lake, pray tell, are you going to suggest is bigger?”
The man leaned back on his stool, maybe two inches.
“Well, technically, that would be the Caspian
“I thought we were talking about lakes.”
“Technically speaking. That’s what I’m saying. The
Caspian Sea is technically a lake and not a sea.”
“And it’s bigger than Lake Superior.”
“Yes,” the man said. “Definitely.”
“The water in the Caspian Sea,” Jackie said, “is it
saltwater or fresh?”
The man swallowed. “It’s saltwater.”
“Okay, then. If it’s technically a lake, then it’s the
biggest, deepest saltwater lake in the world. Apples and oranges, am I
right? Can we agree on that much?”
Jackie turned, and the man should have let it go. But
“Well, actually, no.”
“LakeBaikal,” the man said. “In Russia. That’s fresh
water. And it’s way deeper than Lake Superior.”
“In Russia, you said? Is that where it is?”
“LakeBaikal, yes. I don’t know if it has a bigger
surface area, but I know it’s got a lot more water in it.
Like twice as much as Lake Superior. So really, in that respect, it’s
twice as big.”
Jackie nodded his head, like this was actually an interesting fact he
had just learned instead of the most ridiculous statement ever uttered
by a human being. It would have been like somebody telling him that
Mexico is actually more Scottish than Scotland.
I was sitting by the fireplace, of course. On a cold
morning on the last day of March, after cutting some wood and touching
up the road with my plow, where else would I be? But either way I was
close enough to hear the whole exchange, and right about then I was
hoping we’d all find a way to end it peacefully.
The man in the pink snowmobile suit started fishing for his wallet.
Jackie raised a hand to stop him.
“Don’t even bother, sir. Your money’s no good here.”
The man looked over at me this time, as if I could
actually help him.
“A man as smart as you,” Jackie said, “it’ll be my
honor to buy you a drink.”
“Well, okay, but come on, don’t you-”
“Are you riding today?”
“Uh, yeah,” the man said, looking down at his suit.
Like what the hell else would he be doing?
“Silly me. Of course you are. So why don’t you head
back on out there while we still have some snow left.”
“It is pretty light this year. Must be global warming
“Global warming, now. So you mean like our winter might
last ten months instead of eleven? Is that the idea? You’re like a
walking library of knowledge, I swear.”
“Listen, is there a problem here? Because I don’t-”
“No, no,” Jackie said. “No problem. You go on out and
enjoy your ride. In fact, you know what? I hear they’ve got a lot more
snow in Russia this year. Up by that real big lake. What was it called
The man didn’t answer.
“LakeBaikal,” I said.
“I wasn’t talking to you, Alex.”
“Just trying to help.”
“I’m leaving,” the man said, already halfway to the
door. “And I won’t be back.”
“When you get to that lake, do me a favor, huh? I’m still not
convinced it’s deeper, so can you drive your snowmobile and let it sink
to the bottom with you still on it? You think you could do that? I’d
really appreciate it.”
The man slammed the door behind him. Another drinking
man turned away for life, not that he’d have any other place to go in
Paradise, Michigan. Jackie picked up his towel and threw it at me. I
ignored him and turned back to the fire.
They have long, long winters up here. Did I mention
that yet? By the time the end of March drags around, everyone’s just a
few degrees past crazy. Not just Jackie.
The sun was trying to come out as I was
driving back up my road. It was an old unpaved logging road, with banks
of snow lingering on either side. When the snow started to melt, the
road would turn to mud and I’d have a whole new set of problems to deal
with. By the time it dried out, it would be time for black fly season.
I passed Vinnie’s cabin first. Vinnie “Red Sky”
LeBlanc, my only neighbor and maybe my only true friend. Meaning the one
person who truly understood me, who never wanted anything from me, and
who never tried to change me.
I passed by the first cabin, the one my father and I
had built a million years ago – before I went off to play baseball and
then become a cop – then the next four cabins, each bigger than the one
before it, until I got to the end of the road. There stood the biggest
cabin of all, looking almost as good as the original. I’d been
rebuilding it for the past year, starting with just the fireplace and
chimney my father had built stone by stone. Now it was almost done. Now
it was almost as good as it was before somebody burned it down.
I parked the truck and went inside. Vinnie was already
there, on his hands and knees in the corner of the kitchen, once again
working harder and longer than I ever did myself, making me feel like my
debt to him was more than I could ever repay.
“What are you ruining now?” I said to him.
“I’m fixing the trim you put down on this floor.” He
was in jeans and a white T-shirt, his denim jacket hanging on the back
of one of the kitchen chairs. He had a long strip of quarter round
molding in his hand, the very same strip I had just tacked down the day
“You’re ripping it up? How is that fixing it?”
“You used the wrong size trim. You need to start over.”
“It’s not the wrong size. Damn it, Vinnie, is it any
wonder it’s taking me forever to finish this place? You wanna rip the
ceiling off, too?”
“You got a good half-inch gap here,” he said, pointing
to the gap between the floor and the lowest log on the wall.
“That’s a quarter inch.”
“Here it might be, but over on the other side of the
room it gets wider. You have to measure the gap at its longest before
you go out and buy your trim.”
“Vinnie, what the hell’s wrong with you?”
“I told you, you bought the wrong size. And as long as
you’re buying new molding, get something with a little more style, too.
Quarter round is boring.”
“Nobody’s going to notice it. It’s on the floor, for
He turned away from me, shaking his head. He grabbed
another length of molding and ripped it up like he was pulling weeds.
“Something’s eating at you,” I said. “I can tell.”
“I’m fine. I just wish you’d do things right for a
First Jackie and now Vinnie. Such a parade of cheerful people in my
life. I was truly a lucky man.
“It’s actually trying to get nice outside,” I said. “We
might even have some sunlight soon. Will that make you feel better?”
He didn’t look up. “You know one thing that bothers
“How long have you been living in this cabin?”
“Ever since I’ve been working on it. It just makes
“I think you’re done now, Alex. You’ve got the floor
down. You’ve got the woodstove working. As soon as I redo your trim,
this place will be ready to rent out again.”
“It’s been a bad winter for the snowmobile people. You
“You could have this place rented right now. It’s your
biggest cabin. You’re just wasting money.”
“Since when are you my accountant?”
He stopped what he was doing and sat still on the
floor. He finally turned to look at me. “You need to move back into your
cabin. You can’t keep avoiding it.”
“I will.” It was my turn to look away. “As soon as I’m
Vinnie didn’t say anything else. I got down on my knees
and helped him tear up the remaining strips of floor molding. An hour
later I was on my way to Sault Ste. Marie to buy the new strips, five
eighths instead of half inch, cloverleaf instead of quarter round. As I
passed that first cabin, I made a point of not even looking at it.
That was how the day went. That last day in
March. It started with breakfast at the Glasgow Inn and ended with
dinner in the same place. It was like most every other day in Paradise.
Vinnie had helped me finish the baseboard trim, then he’d gone over to
the rez to sit with his mother for a while. She’d not been feeling like
herself lately. Maybe just one more person who was tired of winter. I
was hoping that was it, that she’d feel better once the sun came back.
That we’d all feel better.
Vinnie gave me a nod as he came through the door. Back
from the rez, then a shift at the casino dealing blackjack, stopping in
now because that’s what you do around here. Every night. Jackie was
watching hockey on the television mounted above the bar. Vinnie went
over and stood behind him, just like I had told him to do.
“Hey, Jackie,” he said, “I heard something interesting
“What’s that, Vin?”
“Did you know Lake Superior isn’t really the biggest
lake in the world? Or the deepest?”
Jackie turned and glared at me.
“I’ll throw you right out on your ass,” he said. “I
swear to God I will.”
Finally, something to smile about, on a cold, cold
night. I looked back into the fire and watched the flames dance. My last
hour of peace until everything would change.
We’re not supposed to believe in evil anymore, right?
It’s all about abnormal behavior now. Maladjustment, overcompensation,
or my favorite, the antisocial personality disorder. Fancy words I was
just starting to hear in that last year on the force, before I looked
into the eyes of a madman as he pulled that trigger without even
In a way, I’ve never gotten past it. I’m still lying on
that floor, watching the light in Franklin’s eyes slowly going out. My
partner, the man I was supposed to protect at all costs. Later, in the
hospital, they pulled two slugs from my body and left the one that was
too close to my heart to touch. It’s been with me ever since, a constant
reminder of the evil I saw that night, all those years ago on a warm
summer evening in Detroit. You’d never convince me otherwise. No, I’d
seen evil as deep as it could ever get.
But like Jackie and his beloved lake, you’d never know
there was something deeper out there until somebody came to you and told
you about it. A deeper lake. A lake you’ve never seen before. Even then,
you might not believe it. Not unless he took you there and showed it to
It was about to happen. Minutes away, then seconds.
Then the door opened and the cold air blew in and the last person I
expected to see that night stepped inside, carrying a big problem and
looking for my help.
The end of chapter 1 of MISERY BAY.